Comments : My just desserts

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I hope this isnt true, dont let anyone bring u down, that is something i have learned in life (as well as u can onli trust urself) well done, this poem was strong

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Ur sick!! Go see ur doctor

  • 17 years ago

    by likethewind

    Its good, really good. but thats just my opinion. i just have one question... is it true? im just wondering because if it is u shouldnt let people bring you down, it doesnt matter what they say, its what you say. its a really good poem. i like it. good job.

    yours always,
    oxoxlikethewindxoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by likethewind

    Its amazing! i love ur poems but this one is as close to perfect as a person can get! good job!

    yours always
    oxoxlikethewindxoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by likethewind

    Its amazing! i love ur poems but this one is as close to perfect as a person can get! good job!

    yours always
    oxoxlikethewindxoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Wow. i love the meaning
    It kinda makes you think
    Great job!!
    5/5