When u read this poem a few times u kind of get different meanings perhaps a look at the world we live in, i dont know, but still an amazing poem, well done

This is a very good poem! Sometimes I feel the exact same way, I go to sleep and get away from all my troubles and than when wake up I have to face the reality of whats going on around me. Again great poem and thank you for commenting on mine.

I think we all tend to create an alter world of our own, one which is beautiful and just right.
Great poem.

Hey, I love this poem it was great! Thank you so much for commenting mine!

This...was beautiful!
Absolutely perfect.
You did an amazing job with this, I loved every part of it!