"If you cannot take it
then in life, you'll never make it"

something good to remember and use as encouragement, I think?
5/5 always
your favorite friend,
Kate~

Very good write! I luv this line:
"why don't you give up
take a drink out of failures' cup"

Very true...I know people like that, alaways b.i.t.c.h.i.n.g about life...anyway, Def, 5/5! & thanks for the comment on my poem.
-Amanda

Very well written! it flowed all the way through(people seem to have a hang up about that) and it was just an all around good poem..

WOW! I like it you really work hard on this one! good job! I hope i'll be as good as you someday :) the flow was smooth :) TC

Love your poem!! good work

Mmmm...Everyone does complain about how crappy their life is. My poems sometimes do that but not out of emotion. My poems are usually false. The part about your smile being gone I liked. I could picture the things you were speaking of in the poem. Good job. 5