by Synh Feb 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Had ever there been a person, |
This was one sad poem. |
My heart goes out to your neighbour. What a horrible thing to have to endure. |
by Vanessa
I am sorry for your nebior, but you are helping the world with this problem, by getting the message out there, you are doing an excellent job. This poem was well written, well pinned, the flow was a litttle off toward the end, but nothing to big to worry about. otherwise, this poem holds strong emtion, and is a very good write. Keeep up the good work 4/5 |
Ohh... very sad and disturbing.. but its the horrible truths of life.. wonderful job still.. the strucuture is good.. as well as the rhyme and flow which is flawless.. spectacular write |