Wow this is really good. it's a dark poem, i think you should put it under that cat. , but yeah great job! 5/5

~Kristina

This is well written and i appreciate you doing that for me

Wow very nice poem i really like it...comment mine always Mandz

I really liked the feel you get when you read this poem. It had consistent flow, and the ending line really wrapped it up. I really liked how the rhymes never seemed force, it seemed natural, and it just went along with your flow. Great poem, I love the imagery.

A dark poem yes packed with emotion and very natural you keep it simple and short which is great

You are a fantastic writer. I have been reading your work and you inspire me!!

Well done! you are awesome.

Honeypot x

That was really nice! i dont really think its that sad tho! but i still loved it! 5/5

I like it, it is short but greatly written. It creates superb image with powerful end. 5/5