First kiss, First love

by Ray the emo i am   Feb 6, 2007


Late at night
Lost in each other's eyes
Holding each other
Talking about are future
It gets silent
Almost like a dream
It feels like where in slow motion
Are first kiss comes softly
At that moment
I realize what true love is
I have had
Are first kiss, my first love was
Not shy for now
True love is shinning
Babe you are my first true love

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  • 17 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Awww so sweeet ray!~!!
    keep up the good writes
    and never give up:d
    tk care now
    breex

  • 17 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Wow that was so sweet aaawwwww
    Do u hav a special sum1 this is for?

  • 17 years ago

    by Simply Complex

    Besides that u used ''are'' for ''our'' its really good =] 5/5

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