A Dream

by A Good Man   Feb 6, 2007


A dream of mine that I can pursue of what I've been wanting and having a hunger for a long time.
A dream is but a dream until you make it a reality.
If you fail at what you do,keep striving on what you want to pursue.
Never give up and never say never.
Keep the faith,read the word,and keep striving for your dream.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Hmm. This poem seemed a little scattered to me. The words were good, but I think you might need to tie them together a bit better. Also, I think you should maybe add more it was a little short, add some more metaphors perhaps? Just some things you might want to think about to make you poem better.

    Cayce xx

  • 16 years ago

    by IcAnMaKeIt

    I love this one its so true!

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Great poem!! very inspiring!! well done :P

  • 16 years ago

    by Harutan

    This is a great poem, not many people can understand that a poem doesnt need to rhym or anything, its very meaningful and i think its perfect \o/!

  • 16 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Joseph this is a really good poem. I like reading it. 5/5 kasia

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