by Tim Mathis Apr 3, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Broken dreams, With endless themes, Lie dead upon the night. |
This one was great too. Loved how u used a different structure than the norm for poems, I just love playing around w/them and try not to use the usual ABAB, etc when I write rhyming poems. Just plain short but great. |
I was definitely impressed with this poem. Great! It is so funny how so little words can sum up so many feelings. Keep up the good work! |