Haha, nice one gary, i was chuckling to myself through most of it...never tried that with words before...love it ha.

I just loved this, Gary. Wow, some serious thought went into this piece and it turned out amazing. I've never read anything like this and it's quite intriguing.

"a feather in the weather"
^^^ I LOVE this line, it's so pretty. Really awesome writing, thanks for sharing your talent with us, man. You rock! ;o)

Great word play! A fun read!

Breath taking! AMAZING i loooved it...so very unique and individual...never read anything quite like it

That was very cool! enjoyable, and still made me think..great writing. You are certainly not cliche and boring, there is always something interesting going on in your writing..thanks for sharing

Gary
Great job on the play of words. I really enjoyed reading this piece. Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

Wow, so powerful and unique, excellently written. I like it from the beginning to the end, it's so creative
Great fob, truly amazing piece, 5/5 from me