What it do?

by me   Feb 7, 2007


Can i see what it do?
actually no let me stop loving you
i don't wanna see what it do
your my weakness but i love u too
so tell me what am i gonna do
when all these feelings got me thinking about you
all i wanna do is flee
from all these emotions and feelings but wat am i suppose to do
when all i want is you?
this is just getting confusing
but in this game i think I'm losing
still caring for you
and just wanting to hold you
come on tell me what to do
so i can stop thinking about you..

*comment plz tell me what u think of it*

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  • 17 years ago

    by NIDAL

    You depict emotion very well..I can feel your longing for this person...the passions come out in your words...enjoyable read 5/5 thanks for sharing " check out "Gifts of Sorrow" "arabian sands" "my tears" thanks for your vote and comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom K

    Just wanted to say hey.. I enjoyed this poem. For one so young, you show alot of emotion and deep feelings. Keep writing.. keep getting better.. keep loving and lettting your emotions show! Good job! t