Just wanted to say hey.. I enjoyed this poem. For one so young, you show alot of emotion and deep feelings. Keep writing.. keep getting better.. keep loving and lettting your emotions show! Good job! t

You depict emotion very well..I can feel your longing for this person...the passions come out in your words...enjoyable read 5/5 thanks for sharing " check out "Gifts of Sorrow" "arabian sands" "my tears" thanks for your vote and comments