by ben thompson Feb 7, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
For a moment in time we were all that mattered........ |
by lisa
Wow ....... huni that is a great poem.it deeply moved me well done xlisa |
by debbylyn
What a great story put to verse.....you do so well this kind of fictional write...kept my attention throughout. Well done! 5/5 |
by Rachel RTVW
Sad story put to rhyme. Nice job! |
"So when I broke your heart it shattered your soul" |
by Cindy
Excellent job! The story you have put to verse held my attention from begining to end. I love the messeges you add to alot of your poems. 5/5 Take Care Cindy |