This is amazing! I love it so much! Even though it is short it isnt lacking anywhere that miat poems would. you have a fantastic flow and beautiful word choices. There is a great beginning a strong end. It is well thought and has been penned perfectly. The author's voice is very clear, their own personal style shinea through and makes the piece really pop out to the audience. with so few words you have created a masterpiece that takes so much talent and skill, I highly congradate you. 5/5