This person seem's to be really dear to you, it's very sweet - so 5/5 from me keep up the beautiful poetry and live life to it's fullest -
peace out, broken_reflection

I love this because it shows the true battle someone has withing themselves over whats the best thing to do

That's interesting.

Very beautiful poem.. it touched my heart, and the ending was so amazing. I loved the poem from the begining, and i didn't know that i could love it more until the end. It was so powerful. It may have been long, but i kept my interest.*that kinda hard to do somtimes.. hehe* this was a very amazing job. You had such awesome rhyming and flow. I looked at some of your other poems. and they just couldnt keep my attention.. but this one... is amazing, i couldn't stop reading it.. i just wanted more! you did great! i love it!!! keep up the freaking awesome work! :D