"We had such big hopes and dreams
Remember we were going to grow old together
Rocking on our porch holding hands
My only comfort, We will be together forever"

I loved that stanza because i have been imagining that scenario a lot lately.
Amazing work as always
I feel like i haven't spoken to you in ages =(
5/5
*Gem*

This was really beautiful.
The last stanza really hit me hard it had so much emotion and depth in it.
Beautiful, as always.

That was so beautiful with a lot of feeling.

Great poem.

Full of heart and soul as all your work. Great job on this!

We had such big hopes and dreams
Remember we were going to grow old together
Rocking on our porch holding hands
My only comfort, We will be together forever

One day

Cindy, I have no doubt that one day that will come to be a reality for you and John.....what a beautiful dream....Love Debbie

This is so beautiful. you have amazing talent which captures the readers into your work. so sad and deep and the flow of it is great =). the last paragraph was so sad but i think it made the whole poem. i really like it well done.

p.s. thank you so much for all the comments you have left on my work. i would love to know what you think of some of my other poems.... thanks =)

Lovely, the passion in your words is so heartffelt, i really feel for you darling, fantasic poem cindy xox sam

Love that comment from Dave!!
John is still linked in love and the bond is
Oh! so strong.....

Beautiful moving write...you are so loved on this site....

One day!!! well what would we all do without such beautiful hopes...this is so beautifully written...could feel the full flow of emotions.....u r just so amazing.

loved it

all the best and take care

We had such big hopes and dreams
Remember we were going to grow old together
Rocking on our porch holding hands
My only comfort, We will be together forever

One day
^^^^

That day will come Cindy. I feel with all my heart, we will meet up with those we love one day in a place far more beautiful than our eyes have yet to see.

A touching piece that comes straight from the heart.
Take care Cindy
Luanne

Another awesome poem Cindy.
it brightens my day to read your words.
love ya, Tara-Kay

Hey Cindy, great poem!! i loved it. very well written. xx

I just love your poems. I can always relate to them. I know what you feel. Great poem!

This is a really nice poem! i can seriosly relate to this poem~ awsome

Fantastic poem as usual huni.well done .your work always deeply moves me

This is great! I wish I could write my poetry like this and it fits me. I was engaged for a year and then he left me and moved across the country and each day I wake up hoping it was a dream but I know it's never going to be a dream(that he left) but a nightmare that has snapped into reality.
~Jessica

Tears... again. i love you nana!!! when i am finished with the army and have the money... i would love to come and meet you. oxoxoxoxoxo love you