by Dark Demise Feb 7, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Whats your insight on pasts? |
Aw, this is such a good poem. I love the image I got from this. The flow worked so perfect. I've had dreams kind of like this, but I love the way you described it. Good job! |
Haha, at the end you said it was based on a drean, and all through this poem I kept thinking this sounded like a dream/nightmare. It seriously sent chills down my spine. You are very good at descriptive words, they make your poems more.. well just more. I really liked this one! |
I think this was wonderfully written. Dreams are so bizarre, and you portrayed that well, with strong vocabulary and imagery. Nicely penned. |
by Jenni
Wow! Poems that you write in the middle of the night always seem better than the ones you write when you're wide awake! great job! 5/5 |
Wow, now that was good. I especially loved the last line - a great way to close it. Good work. |