Blinded

by Mo   Feb 7, 2007


I blew out the stars a long time ago
For what good will they do me here?
I am blinded by my failure only
I am blinded by my increasing fear

I blew out my chances at riches
Of a lifestyle of leisure and love
I am blinded by things that are cold now
I am blinded by things undreamed of

I blew out the passion that burnt strong
For why should I feel such a thing?
I am blinded by my unworthyness
I am blinded by the white love that stings

For who would have known I'd end up here
My scars make sure Im reminded
Living a life that is twisted with lies
And these lies are the reason I am blinded

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nebula

    Another good one, flow nicely, easy read, good rhythm. I like the way it ends...

  • 17 years ago

    by Mihaela

    I like a lot this poem and I also like your style of writing...Congratulations,you have done a great work.Take good care of you.Best regards,Michelle XxXx

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a good poem but the ending was a good staement but I didnt think it complomented the poem as a whole I enjoyed it and it was good Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    This has to be the best poem I've read. I'm so putthing this on my favorite poems. I love your writing even tho this is the first time I'm reading your poems. I'll comment more!

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenBrit

    Thats a great poem! 5/5
    If you get a chance can you take a look at mine?? There not as good as yours but there something! thx

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