by Firooz Feb 7, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
To find the right one, the only one for you, |
by Debbie
This, yet again, was another beautiful piece of love poetry. I admit, the last line spoiled the rhyme scheme. But it's no big deal, because overall you've penned this poem undeniably well. Keep on writing what you feel and like. |