Aww that was cute

Great!! you rhyme and keep the storyline and the storyline it self is very beautifull =)

Another beautifull poem :)) 99/5 i give this one :))

Oh the moonlight sure brings back memories of happier times :) great job 5/5 but i still cant read the lates poems nothing comes up in there :((

This is so sweet and beautiful....the memories of the one true love. Great job! Take care Cindy

Very nice poemkeep up the good work
~beck~

Those 3 words :) can make or break a world :) a beautifull poem :) loved reading every line 99/5

I miss having love like that...

That's so sweet.
I really love the poem.
Full of emotion.
Beautiful piece of writing!

That was an amazing poem! really sweet! and has a lot of emotion and strong words

AHHH, this is beautiful, B E A U T I F U L, i just experienced somthing like this, only the sky was cloudy! i have been looking for this kind of poem!!!
great job
5/5
~barbi

Hey girlie i dont know if you remember me or not i havent talked or got on in a while well your poetry is still as good as ever. but me and mark are still together im sittin at his house on his computer right now everything worked out . well ttyl love yas

Another good write. beautiful word usage. all the best wishes ben thompson