The Mind Altering Drug

by David Paul   Feb 7, 2007


*breath in*
*breath out*
*gather wits*
*stare in her eyes*
*open mouth*
"i love you"
*mean every word of it*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    I love the way this poem ends.

    *Mean every word of it*

    So sweet and true. Made me smile. Clever title too.

    Em xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by Cooper

    Short and sweet. Hmmm, I like it. Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Damn....david that's cool....so simple yet it expresses so much...so this is what you were talking about...

  • 17 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Very nice david