by .K.i.T.t.Y. Feb 7, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Winter's unseen beauty, |
by Tom Swart
More, we need more lines . I agree with Kitty. baited breath and a hook with strings attached need to reel into this poem a few more lines of emotion. its a bud waiting to bloom |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Is this too short? Should more be added. I like it the way it is, but I was wondering if you feel that there needs to be more. |