by rubberduckii Feb 8, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Its long and may be hard to understand from an outside point of view but i guess you dont write for anyone else to get but you huh |
by Alex D
I didn't really like the structure at all, the way the lengths of the stanzas kept changing and the rhyme scheme kept changing. Was a real turn off for this poem. The content wasnt bad though |