by emptysole Feb 8, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
My eyes look happy, |
by shyaners
That was a really good poem. I agree with Alicia and one part I didnt really like but I also believe it happens :). Nice work. You have a really nice writing style. |
by XfromwithinX
Luverly as per usual xx |
by Alicia
That was really sweet, I loved it alot. I like how you worded it and the flow was good, just one little part I didn't like, but hey, it happens, lol. |
by Alex D
Wow! Clear message, good flow for the most part, great word choice i loved it |