Wow! Clear message, good flow for the most part, great word choice i loved it

That was really sweet, I loved it alot. I like how you worded it and the flow was good, just one little part I didn't like, but hey, it happens, lol.

~Alicia

Luverly as per usual xx

That was a really good poem. I agree with Alicia and one part I didnt really like but I also believe it happens :). Nice work. You have a really nice writing style.
-Shyan-