Did You?

by xPerfect Chaosx   Feb 8, 2007


So little time
And so much to say
My heart lays here bleeding
So let the words come freely

I have loved you
Since the moment I laid eyes on you
Your amazing eyes
Caught my glance
Your sweet smile
Melted my heart
Your soft fingers
Brushed away the pain
Yet this was all a ruse
A way to escape
A fantasy world
That you lived in
And in which you deceived me

In truth
Your ugly
Your soul is twisted and gnarled
Your touch is sharp
And your smile deceiving
You play with peoples emotions
And you make me weep
Is that what you wanted?
To break me?
You succeeded,
But I won't let you see it
I'll hold my head high
And I'll look straight ahead
Even as I'm dying inside
Even as I'm slowly bleeding to death

Would it give you satisfaction?
To know that you broke me
Would you laugh?
Would you be glad?
Your twisted mind
And your sick words
Reminding me
That I'm no longer whole

This internal scar won't heal
And it won't fade
Your work here is done
Move on to your next victim
Leave me to die in peace
Go and work your devilish charms
Go and break hearts
Go and mess with fragile minds
It's what you do best

Backstabbing and lying
Cheating and hurting
Do you know the chaos
You leave in your wake?
Do you know
How much you meant to me?
I never told you

You broke me,
Is that what you want to hear?
Do you want to know
How much that simple statement
Hurt me?
Do you even care?
The tears will come
And the tears will go
But the scars will forever remain

So many questions
Left unanswered
But one,
Just one
That gnaws at my soul
Did you ever care?

Ok, so let me know what you think, I will always return the favor, thanks for reading, I hope you enjoyed it!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by paul alexander

    I like this poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Mihaela

    Congratulations!What a great poem!Keep on the good work.Take care of you!Best regards,Michelle xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by swill

    I think that was written from within your soul, and that you often often wear a mask of joy (judging from your profile).

    Hope you find peace and joy in the world - everyone deserves it.

    And move on from this guy. It's the hardest thing anyone can do, and yet, there will be so many harder things in life....So you gotta learn to deal with em, dont you?

  • 17 years ago

    by Someones Sanity

    Wow.......I don't know what to say except wow

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    Did you even care?

    thats the question that so many of us have incuding myself.

    "This internal scar won't heal
    And it won't fade
    Your work here is done
    Move on to your next victim
    Leave me to die in peace
    Go and work your devilish charms
    Go and break hearts
    Go and mess with fragile minds
    It's what you do best"

    ^ those words were so powerful and so true i loved it, and i think this was one of your best so far! great job, and every word here means something... 5/5 for definite! great job! and thanks for the comments!