I swear. It is amazing. I feell the complette same away about this guy.
Good job hun.

I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT!

I love to read different styled poems. this was excellent. not the usual 4 line stanza's. you had more lines. well done!

5/5 again. David

Did you even care?

thats the question that so many of us have incuding myself.

"This internal scar won't heal
And it won't fade
Your work here is done
Move on to your next victim
Leave me to die in peace
Go and work your devilish charms
Go and break hearts
Go and mess with fragile minds
It's what you do best"

^ those words were so powerful and so true i loved it, and i think this was one of your best so far! great job, and every word here means something... 5/5 for definite! great job! and thanks for the comments!

Wow.......I don't know what to say except wow

I think that was written from within your soul, and that you often often wear a mask of joy (judging from your profile).

Hope you find peace and joy in the world - everyone deserves it.

And move on from this guy. It's the hardest thing anyone can do, and yet, there will be so many harder things in life....So you gotta learn to deal with em, dont you?

Congratulations!What a great poem!Keep on the good work.Take care of you!Best regards,Michelle xxx

I like this poem