Cry Baby Cry

by Alicia   Feb 8, 2007


Cry baby cry,
Your life is a lie.
Momma don't love you,
And daddy's always high.
Your alone in this world,
It's sad but it's true.
Your friends can't relate,
And you have no one to talk to.

Your life's getting worse,
Day after day,
Momma's poppin' pills,
And daddy's now gone away.
You've lost most your friends,
And are now left with one.
He can't talk to you,
But he gets the job done.

He releases you feelings,
He releases your thoughts,
You fell so good,
Until your blood clots.
Momma finds out,
But doesn't really care.
As with your friends,
Who are no longer there.

Cry baby cry,
Your life is a lie.
Nobody knows you,
So you might as well die....

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  • 17 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    Wow, I think this poem is my favorite out of all the poems I read by you..Keep in mind that's only 3, Haha. But, the stanzas were kept short, which is traditional in a rhyming piece like this, and I had an eye for the rhyme scheme.

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    Nice one. Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    Really sad, but REALLY good. It kinda sounds like a Luda song if you sing it in a rap way... lol! JK, girl. No, I LOVE this poem. I LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT! This is one of those once in a career things. This is one of your best, I must say. 5/5
    PV

  • 17 years ago

    by this is only the beggining

    I really like this one.it's good.it sounds like somethin i would right.thanks for the comment on my poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Aw man that was so sad! a very nice write tho. I really like how you repeated the cry that was really effective :) keep it up girl!

    love ruthie

  • 17 years ago

    by shyaners

    This is a good poem. I think its up on my favorite list but is not the top. I just love your work Alicia!!

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