Best poem i've read in a long time 5/5
great job.
--josh

This is a good poem. I think its up on my favorite list but is not the top. I just love your work Alicia!!

Aw man that was so sad! a very nice write tho. I really like how you repeated the cry that was really effective :) keep it up girl!

love ruthie

I really like this one.it's good.it sounds like somethin i would right.thanks for the comment on my poem.

Really sad, but REALLY good. It kinda sounds like a Luda song if you sing it in a rap way... lol! JK, girl. No, I LOVE this poem. I LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT! This is one of those once in a career things. This is one of your best, I must say. 5/5
PV

Wow, I think this poem is my favorite out of all the poems I read by you..Keep in mind that's only 3, Haha. But, the stanzas were kept short, which is traditional in a rhyming piece like this, and I had an eye for the rhyme scheme.

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A
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B
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D

Nice one. Keep up the good work.