Complicated

by Nelle   Feb 8, 2007


Once you look in the mirror, and your heart shatters,
You realize in your head now that nothing matters.
You see yourself how you really are,
You hope and pray that it's just a scar.

Why can't you be as pretty as your mother?
You ask yourself this question over and over.
You see your friends and they are so thin.
Then there you are asking yourself why can't i win

You try your hardest to be the best.
Until one day you fall just like all the rest.
You hate yourself and all that you do.
You ask yourself, "Will I really make it through?"

You want so hard to prove you are smart.
You want people to see that you really do have a heart.
You want so bad to be skinny like your friend.
But, no, you realize for you this is the end.

[[Okay i dont really know if you can understand this. I started writing about something and then my topics kind of switched. So, yeah honest comments are much appreciated]]

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  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    I can call this one of the greatest poem with a true meanings behind it,
    it is so true yet "life happens deal with it"
    beside the great meaning of the poem, I also love the style you used in this poem, specially the rhyme was one of the greatest that flow greatly.
    keep up the great job as you are really talented writer. a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Hmm... I did see the topic change, but only because I knew to look for it. The rhyme in this piece is very good. It does not seem at all forced, a trait that I like. However your first line to this poem threw me a little. It was long, and to be quite honest, clumsy. I like the idea and concept for that line. But I think that you need to shorten it or re-word it differently. Just an opinion however. Other than that I did like this piece a lot. *4/5

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