Comments : The light surrounding You

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Beautiful! I really loved this poem your love really shines from this write. Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    An emotion filled piece. Not too over the top, just elegant in it's own way. Eloquent wording and perfect cadence, this piece comes together nicely. The descriptions are enough to produce a couple images, but not an overpowering ammount. Superbly written. *5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    These feelings, nothing can change,
    They will only grow stronger each night,
    There was a time where I was confused,
    But you made this time more bright,

    My favorite part. I loved the poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    Interesting...

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    As always...a sweet...passionate poem...great write my dear friend...keep writing...ur poems always spread love in air

    all the best and take care