by Rachel RTVW Feb 8, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
I looked upon his face into the wrinkles of time, |
I know how you were feeling when you saw this man. My great grandmother continued calling for her husband, and It was so emotionaly heartbreaking to me. I couldn't do anything for her, except hug her and tell her that everything was going to be ok. So..lovely poem, beautifuly written, and your message is quite powerful. |
This brought tears to my eyes it was so sad. beautifully written tho great job dear. |
That gave me shivers, it was so sad. are these poems based on patients you have treated, if so, your a very strong yet inspired person. keep it up hun |
by Phoenix
:( This is very sad... Did you just write this, or do you know someone that's really like this? :( |
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