Who am I

by GIRL IN LOVE   Feb 8, 2007


I don't know who i am anymore.
what has happened to me.
most will say i am a Christian girl, but to tell you the truth I'm not this anymore.

things haved changed and for this i
am in so much pain.
for there is nothing else to gain.
some might even say i caused them pain.

how do i go back to my old ways Christian and good, when I'm too far down on the wrong path, i i am disappointed in my self, why did i let my live get this way. if only i can take back the things i did and said, then things would be OK.

wish i could laugh and things would be OK. but there is just to much pain.

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  • 17 years ago

    by jason

    The poem its self was good but you should try putting it into lines instead of having it all bunhced up, it will help people understand the rythym you try to give it and make it look better but still a good read 5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by The Simpsons rule

    Really good!
    i no wat its like to want to laugh but all you can feel is pain
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    The flow was very broken, but the idea of the poem still managed to come thru. i think it would really benefit from being broken up into appropriate lines.

    :)

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    I have got the meaning behind your poem and i am very sad... it was sad poem.... and u know what is the pain of love. gd wrk.

  • 17 years ago

    by unprotected lover

    Very nice poem thanks for the comment.

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