Very nice poem thanks for the comment.

I have got the meaning behind your poem and i am very sad... it was sad poem.... and u know what is the pain of love. gd wrk.

The flow was very broken, but the idea of the poem still managed to come thru. i think it would really benefit from being broken up into appropriate lines.

:)

much love and many kisses,
bex

Really good!
i no wat its like to want to laugh but all you can feel is pain
5/5

The poem its self was good but you should try putting it into lines instead of having it all bunhced up, it will help people understand the rythym you try to give it and make it look better but still a good read 5/5 from me