Comments : Something Unpredictable

  • 17 years ago

    by Pain Remains

    This is a fantastic poem and heartfelt poem, and a question we all ask ourselves at some point in our lives. Really loved your poem well done
    Jade x

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    The message in your poem was great. The unanswered question will always remain......Why?
    As for critique of your poem, watch for spelling mistakes. There were a couple in the poem but the overall message was not disturbed from this. The flow of the poem was really nice. I found myself putting music to the poem and found it's flow to be much easier when I did this.
    Thanks for the comment.
    Keep writing.
    Dixie