Merry Go Round (song)

by Mo   Feb 8, 2007


Alone in her room
She cries herself to sleep
Not knowing what she\'ll lose and what she\'ll keep
She thought she w\'s supposed to
Live happily ever after...
But baby,
Life aint no fairytale

Cause lifes not fair
to those that it should be
and no ones there
to relieve you of your pain
You\'ve got to get off
that merry-go-round... once again.

Her resolutions fall
to the ground
Stuck in one place on an endless
merry-go-round
Her once tender heart
Snatched up by wolves...
But baby,
You got to hold onto your dreams

Cause lifes not fair
to those that it should be
and no ones there
to relieve you of your pain
You\'ve got to get off
that merry-go-round... once again.

[**Dont comment too harshly - Its still definitely only a work in progress... had to write it down before it slipped from my mind!**]

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I'll be glad to hear this :) if you ever record it xD I love the title hihi and I like the emotions in it. Keep writing my friend.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is superb. I like your wordings and you have just chosen the appropriate words. Your descriptions are beautiful and the flow is also nice. Keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    The metaphor was great really capturing and caught the eye. I found this to hold so much emotion which was expressed greatly. Good effort on this well done on this poem~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Behind Blue Eyes

    I love this poem! so much emotion...there's just something about it that pulls me into it, sends shivers down my spine [ i guess 'cause i can relate to it so much]

    wonderful job!!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sea2Summit

    You've got a great connection between your feelings and your metaphoric expressions. You touched on expressing anger vs. forgiveness. Which do you think is more thought provoking and delivers more impact?

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