....The more I read your work, the more I see pieces of dialogue from some incredible play (or two or three) ....and sometimes, also, songs.....Your imagination..and your wide and winding use of language can only widen with use and time.....I wonder if you have encountered the various grammar books by Karen Elizabeth Gordon...The Transitive Vampire, for example....
Fairly often your poems have been darker than my taste for poetry, but they are, with a few editing gestures taken into account, always compelling , and thought-provoking....what, after all, is poetry??

I think the catagory here is Life.....

P.S....baron.....barren......this Will help...