If I could

by Laybelled with a name   Feb 8, 2007


If I could write
A thousand words
I'd write them all to you

If I could say
The nicest things
I'd say them all to you

If I could show
You all my heart
I'd show it all with you

If I could share
My love with dead
I'd share it all to you

I don't quite know
How to say
How I really feel

But since you've left
Since you've died
All I've felt is pain

I won't cry
Just go on
Watching each day go past

If I could die
Just fad away, far..
I would fly away..

Deep into the moonlight
And out of this world...
"Just came to say I love you..."

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  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Aww, quite a sad poem.

    It's good, but I'm sure you could have used a wider vocab usage to expand on how good it is.

    "Just fad away, far.." - I think you meant, "Just 'fade' away, far..."

    :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Annabel

    I don't know why you haven't been getting comments... this is really good, i can really relate to it, thank you xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by TearsInTheRain

    All ur poems rawk bekz! Love u xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This poem was good but it could have been better

    If I could show
    You all my heart
    I'd show it all with you

    If I could share
    My love with
    I'd share it all to you

    those two verses they didnt quite sound right but other than that the poem was great 5/5

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