To whom it may concern

by resisting reason   Feb 8, 2007


To the opportunistic freaks
who tormented me when i was weak
look at what you've done to me
to the one who took advantage
when you should have helped,
i hope you burn in hell
to all the promises that were
destined to break
you were all to much to take
so now i'm watching my blood
flow from my veins
watching my life flow down the drain
life is way to hard
thats why i made sure these cuts will never scar
the end is coming up fast
as i drain away my tormented past
im sorry mom and dad
please dont be sad
goodbye

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  • 16 years ago

    by jessica

    Wow this is a good poem.. do you write from experience or do you just write

  • 17 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    I tried to nominate this one too. but its still not working. this one had an excellent flow and showed its meaning clearly. i thought this poem was beautiful.
    --TheGothicAlbino

  • 17 years ago

    by why is life so miserable

    I lubb it !!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jamie Lorraine

    Good i agree with lovelybones freaky rock on

  • 17 years ago

    by LovelyBones

    Good, kidda freaky, but good