Comments : My Fallen Angel

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I loved this. I thought that your wording was wonderful & the flow was great as well.

    & when you began a new idea, i liked how you said, "But then" it kind of made me anticipate what you were going to talk about next.

    great overall 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Alvin Laberinto eNigmaa

    Pretty awesome possum.

  • 17 years ago

    by Alvin Laberinto eNigmaa

    And check mine out.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~sexychick~

    I like this one

    way better than mine

    you are good poem writer....