by Midnight Sun
I really liked this...I thought it made some great points and it makes yah think. (*shouting*) So take that all you rich, ditzy...well you know who you are!!! Lol! Great job (*giggling*). Oh but one thing I wasn't sure if it was a typo or if I'm just blonde but I think the last stanza should be WEAR not WHERE. Hope that helps. Keep it up! :) |
by Krzysztof J
I agree some people need to see life for what it is :) great poem :)) |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
This poem is beautiful. it flows nicely, and hold a true message. i loved the alliteration you placed in the poem. |