by .K.i.T.t.Y.
There is a typo at the bottom line. |
by Jenni Marie
I loved the last two lines of this, I thought they really stood out. |
I like this poem i got one like it not on here yet though i like your style and the many things you write about keep it up |
I like this poem. but i agree with "¤Kitty¤" that no one is worth that. someone once told me that they wanted to be just like me and they thought i was perfect. i'm not i have my own problems and everyone has them. Nobody is perfect! |
I liked this poem alot but the more u envy some1 the more u become uscked into what they want u 2 b |
by MaSkEdSoUl
The last line their is spelled wrong. Anyways I liked this, but like the ones up there said its not worth it. And nobodys perfect everyone has there own share of pain, and sometimes the popular ones are the ones that have it. The flow and rhythm were good too. Keep it up! |