Reminisce

by Jeremy B   Feb 8, 2007


I know I always say
It just a lil too late.
But baby, please accept me,
This can't be our fate.

It doesn't matter how many
Rainy clouds fill the sky,
More tears fall every night
Just from my eyes.

Even though I miss you
So much, you're not here.
You're so far away,
Yet your presence is so near.

I wish I could start us over,
Go back to where we begun.
Redo everything the right way,
Start us over at square one.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    Nice dude, Likeing the new stuff, Short but still very meaningfull and good,

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is so beautiful! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    That was amazing! It was so sweet and had a great flow too it also. Great work keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I thought that this was such a sweet poem about a lost love. i could feel the grief in the tone and the word choice.

    great job with being able to connect with your audience. 5/5

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