I thought that this was such a sweet poem about a lost love. i could feel the grief in the tone and the word choice.

great job with being able to connect with your audience. 5/5

That was amazing! It was so sweet and had a great flow too it also. Great work keep it up!

This is so beautiful! 5/5

Nice dude, Likeing the new stuff, Short but still very meaningfull and good,