A dream turned nightmare

by Heather   Feb 8, 2007


My hidden tears fall freely
Submerged
and concealed
by the night

Do I dare whisper
of this dream
turned nightmare?

The terror of mere days
without you
haunts
my every thought

To survive years of yearning?
my love,

please ask me not

The fear of life without you torments
my mind til' dawn

Please
tell me
how shall I live
when my very heart is gone?

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  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    The terror of mere days
    without you
    haunts
    my every thought
    (My favorite part.)

  • 17 years ago

    by FrozenTearsBleed

    Good poem! I gave it a four, you did have some spelling errors, but besides that it was awesome! you really have some talent. Someday you will shine. Rate and Comment mine

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    This wss a sad love story, i feel as though many girls have these thoughts [i have]

    the words & descriptions are wonderful & the flow was great as well.
    5/5

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