by ellewen Feb 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
She cries |
Wow, when i read this poem i fell into a trance. I love your use of grammer and fine vocabulary. I wonder who inspired you? It's very hard to only have just a "memory" of someone. Just let the past be the past and be reminded of all the things that can be in store for you in the future. |
Hmmm...I kind've liked it...the flow wasn't the best for me...but I absolutely loved the ending and the idea behind it...sad and true...I think there is a mistake in the 4th stanza...*passed...but, I didn't understand that part, so I'm not sure...it could use a little work...but i still liked it....good job |
Great poem! It was long but you really kept the rhythm and the meaning go so it didn't get dull or overdone. I really enjoyed this poem, and I love the title! |
Wow.. I'm speechless. That was beautiful! It captivated me. The flow was amazingly good. Even if I had wanted to I don't think I could have stopped myself in the middle of reading that. I loved you choice of words. This was definetely one of the better poems I have read. |
by Tripp
This is absolutely amazing. you showed this to me on AIM about a week ago....I honestly can't pick out one section that is the boldest or best, because the entire thing is great. And it all blends together so beautifully, and is so well connected that when taken out of context, the lines will lose so much of their meaning. |