Nice Imagery and Flow.
5/5
~Alicia

I really enjoyed the dark rythme of it, Good job!

I don't have a lot to say about this poem at the moment, it's cryptic and I couldn't understand it, but poetry is in the eye of the beholder, in your eyes, it might be as clear as glass. Anyway, it's a good poem, and I was just wondering about the rhyme scheme. Some of them rhyme, while others don't. Was this meant to happen? It doesn't really matter. Keep up the good work.

I had great enjoyment reading this. It reminds me of myself at times. Thank-you for writing it.