I Cannot

I like how you rhymed the last lines... but it's almost mediocre, although there's plenty of emotion. i like how you showed such emotion in such minimal lines
good job 4/5

~Sandra

So amazing poem. Like there is a huge meaning behind every word and it makes this poem so deep. So simple and sweet.
Truely amazing write! I love this poem. 5/5

It was so simple poem but it has a deeply meaning! great imgary and nice flow.. it was touchy and very heartfelt 5/5

In such a few words such great emotion! You are a very good poet! Never forget that.

For not eventhe last thing
I wish to see,
Are your tears,
Rolling in streams,
Down your sweet, soft cheek.

<3

Great poem. 5/5.