How sad! I can actually feel your words! 5/5

Like ^^^ I agree you can really feel the words inside. very well written, keep it up! and thankx for the comment, it meant a lot to me! 5/5

Wow!!!I'm impressed

This is very sad. You have written it wonderful. The message at the end hopefully will reach someone. Excellent job!

Whoa! this poem is amazing, it has true feelings in it and the wording you used was unique.

well done. 5/5 David

Hmm. nicely done. and pretty too... somehow. =)

happy writin'

-thanks for the comment