What's wrong with me?
Why can't I get you out of my head?
I barely even know you
But everything about you just feels so familiar.
Whenever I'm talking to you, I get this feeling
It's like I don't have to try to be happy
I just am...
And then whenever I'm talking to you,
I also get this laugh
And it's so distinctive that,
Whenever they hear that laugh over the telephone line,
My friends know that I'm talking to you online.
I don't know how I'm getting by on so little of you
BU all I know is that just seeing your face is enough to last me a very long time...
okay ..so i don't know about this one..leave me a comment saying what you think cuz I'm kinda on the edge..and rate pleaseeeeeeee..thank you
Your poem is very deep and expressive.. good job, but i think you could do better.. just remember to let it all out in ways that people can relate..
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Desired Love: One Love: Kassandra