Wilted

by Goran Rahim   Feb 9, 2007


Look,
how days have changed.
do you remember,
the first time,
when between us,
some words were exchanged.
your sweet smile,
while writing your phone number.
our first talk,
then seeing each other.
as the times passed,
between us
a great love started.
Look,
like a seasonal flower,
now
how this love is wilted.

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  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aww. this was sad. it was perfectly written though. i must add you to my favorites, unless your already there. :O)
    Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Edit: how this loved HAS wilted. I LOVED IT. another great poem by the talented Goran.

    I've always wondered. What allowed you to published your poems. what steps did you take?

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Aw this is very amazing.. I liked it.. thanx a lot for your comment on my poem.. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    I like it, i like it a lot. perfect. 5/5 what else?

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wilted what a nice subject , I like the meaning yeah short but powerful great job dude and well written....
    (its so long since read your poems 5/5

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